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Native Drums 3 - inks

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first couple of pages from native drums issue 3. These will be the "inks" even though they are in pencil.
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my only complaint is that in the car the camera is pretty static-more or less looking into the driver's seat from the right side of the car. Try experimenting with camera angles like maybe even from the backseat passenger side on an angle. It helps the reader feel like they are "there" a movie can get away with a bad camera once in a while since the scene is over pretty quick but in comics the frame rate is too slow and people notice. try to really make every frame count- each one should be the best possible solution for the "problem" (in this case camera placement).

Also I love your car action scene at the end I love the Initial D mangas they have so many-I highly recommend checking them out.